아이엘츠 아카데믹 쓰기 시험 파트 1



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이번에도 지난 편에 이어 아카데믹 쓰기 시험 Task 1과 관련된 샘플 문제와 설명을 드리겠습니다. 

Academic writing task 1에서는 통계화되어 있는 정보를 묘사해야 합니다. 여기에서 통계화 되어 있는 정보란 그래프 형식, 차트, 테이블 등을 말합니다. 보여지는 정보에 대한 배경지식이나 시사적인 사항을 질문하는 것이 아니라, 보여지는 정보에 대한 단순 묘사임을 염두에 두고, 20분 동안 150자 분량으로 작성합니다.

아이엘츠 쓰기 시험에서는 아래의 원칙을 잊지 않아야 좋은 글쓰기가 될 수 있습니다.


쓰기 시험 유의사항

Do the following:
- Explain what trends ( patterns of information ) there are
- Give some specific examples to emphasise the trends and support your statements

Do NOT do the following:

- use note form or bullet points
- leave out any required information


아카데믹 쓰기 Task 1에서 범하기 쉬운 오류

• not demonstrating recognition of certain trends
• understanding the data incorrectly
• giving reasons for the data which are not presented in the information
• the answer is not well organised, with ideas being confused


예제) 다음은 Academic Module의 Task 1예제입니다.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The 1st chart shows the results of a survey asking people from Australia the reasons why they travelled abroad. The 2nd chart shows the places that they went to. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in a minimum of 150 words.

Purpose of Travel

1997

1998

1999

2000

2001

Business

9,640

17,300

19,060

23,700

10,300

Holiday

11,560

14,600

16,300

17,800

15,000

Visits to friends

3,665

3,860

3,660

4,200

4,000

Other

789

900

851

693

564

Total

25,655

36,660

39,871

46,393

29,864


Destination

1997

1998

1999

2000

2001

Asia

7,640

12,100

12,060

13,070

12,350

Europe 

8,060

9,030

9,750

10,839

7,314

North America

9,455

14,786

16,570

19,434

9,600

Other

500

744

1,491

3,050

3,300

Total

25,655

36,660

39,871

46,393

29,864



답안의 예)


Between 1997 and 2001 the tables show that overall, 2000 was the year that most Australians went abroad.  Altogether, going on holiday was the most popular reason that Australians went abroad, but in 1999 and 2000 more business trips were made than holiday trips. In 2001 the number of business trips dropped sharply from 23,700 to 10,300.

In the period, the number of trips to visit friends remained fairly constant at between 3,500 and 4,200, and ‘other’ trips never rose above 900.

In terms of destinations, we see a large rise in visits to North America between 1997 and 2000, followed by a big drop in 2001. After a sharp increase in 1997, the number of trips to Asia remained around 12-13,000 per year, while the number of trips to ‘other’ destinations grew dramatically over the 5 years, but remains a small proportion of the total. It was 3,300 in 2001.

Whatever caused the fall in numbers travelling in 2001, this mainly affected business trips, and the biggest destination affected was North America.
(173 words)


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